First Try At Rendering

I realize it looks a little choppy but ill try and fix that up later...

 

It is choppy, and has a halo, sorta white line at parts, but it's not too bad.

I'm in the same boat as you

Click Gimli to see my first Render.

 

yes, it is too choppy.
nice try!

 

Thanks guys I had tried another one but that way the hair is it makes it look like I took a big chunk out of it but thats the way its supposed to be =/

 

Its good for ur first. Just get rid of the white line around it. And u missed a spot on the right

 

its nice for a first try xbox gal tis musch better than mine was .. just work on the white lines

 

There are no white lines around in on my computer :blink:

 

as a first try great and keep it up ^^

 

pretty good for first, stick to it

 

Thank you everyone
Oh and heres my second render http://www.gamerenders.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=64900

 

It's good, what game is it from? Sorry if somebody already said.

 

Good start, but its lil choppy and have some white parts.

 

Oops its not from a game
Its Sailor Mercury from Sailor Moon
Just realized that here was for game renders one ^^'
But technically she was in a game just had really bad graphics :lol:

 

kinda choppy but good for ur first mate

 

Pretty good..there's a little white around the edges and there's some white stuff around it..