Almost couldn't tell what the render was but the shine pointed it out to me. I think the shine should of gone accross at an angle though. I could tell it was a gradient sliding accrossed. I've seen some turn out real nice. I think if you just made a vertical gradient go by it'd work better then having it go with the visor.
Yeah i know...pixel fonts are suppose to be small..and put on none.. i tihnk the pixel font in mine and in yours are the same except urs is blurry and big lol