New Avatar - 1st Try @ An Avi

Tell Meh Waht U Think h34r:

 

nice, but i see something on the left side, looks kinda funky. also, i cannot read that text at all. if it hadnt been for your name i wouldnt have guessed it. and the guy is getting cut off on the sig, well his gun is. and a nice border might look good.
6.9/10

 

It doesn't really flow...Maybe add some more to the simplistec bg and add soem green into it, so it matches with the render. Centering the render would look better.

 

dont like it that much

 

Change the font to some sort of pixel font to make it possible for ppl to read it. And the render is kinda too small.

 

TExt kinda too small.
and white spots on the left

 

Use the space you can. Kinda looks boring if theres big plain patches

But is alright for your first sig

 

the test is very hard to read mayb take away the stroke, or make it bigger and deffinatly change the font