My First Render Need Comments

Hey guys this is my first render...it looks good to me but give me some comments. Constructive critisism excepted.

 

Its a bit choppie. Can you delete the background? (make it transparant)

 

Yeah I can make the background transparent...but what will that do?

 

than we can see if there is a white line around it

 

im too lazy to make it transparent, but you can open it up in a program and delete the bg for yourself if you want

 

its ok, keep it up for hte first oe its much better then my first

 

Ya GJ, im not a fan of Halo tho. :blink:

 

Yea i aint a halo fan neither. But gj on ur render, keep 'em coming

 

Good render though you should have saved it jpg with the transparent b.g.

 

A little choppy and not really my thing. I am more of a fantasy fan or artistic.