My Friend's Poem

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  1. BoBo4eva

    BoBo4eva Well-Known Member

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    Austin you gorgeous white bear, run my fingers through your hair.
    I'll stroke your bum, and make you hum.
    You'll take of your shirt and roll in the dirt.
    Then we'll shower for at least an hour NAKED
    Oh baby you, you got what I need,
    Choclate covered strawberries to you I would feed.
    I'll take you to the candyshop,
    baby let me lick your lollypop.
    You and I get real flirty, so lets get down and do the dirrrrrrrty
    I've seen you naked and it was HOT!
    I think about it quite a lot.
    Friday night the feeling will be RIGHT!
    Lets meet by a tree and it's me you'll see!
     
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    That's disgusting and poorly done.

    F
     
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    i give it a an F+
     
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    :(

    We're on an American forum bud...

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    Whoa. Are you serious?

    Here I was thinking the whole time this was a Armenian forum. Silly me.

    :lol:
     
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    Too bad all the funny kids are stupid.
     
  7. BoBo4eva

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    lol she wrote it as a joke
     
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    echoepidemic Well-Known Member

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    She's stupid if she's thinks that's funny.
     
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    How do we know it's a she?
     
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    Errm. ok.... *steps back*





    Some people... gees.
     
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    it is alright the poem should be a little more serious and then it would be aight.
     
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    Tell here that, That isn't funny,
    It's rather..Disturbing actually.
     

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