don't like the first one at all, too vibrant of a red/orange/yellow color. text is pretty weak, render is... just there, and brushing is so so. 5.5/10 2nd one better, but there's still a lot of red in this one. try toning that down, it's like staring into the sun. otherwise the style is unique, and i like the text, even though you completely slaughtered the spelling. 7/10
6/10 The first one is kind of....Iunno. The render isn't so good, and the brushing isn't all that well done either. The border is really weird, overlay?, and the text is too plain. 8/10 I like the brushing and the blending of the render, but the font isn't that well done.
not bad... the rain splashing effect looks a bit awkward, but i like the brushing and multicoloring. i don't usually like that style text, but it works well. 8/10