1st Proper Template

ok, before you comment on them, banner and background are NOT final or anything, just there to fill the space



basically the first template I've completed, i started some others but never finished.. need some pointers from the pros..

 

Hmm, nothing too great, although the wires look a little cheesey.

 

Looks pretty good, but IMO you should extend the left grey box right down, instead of having it in 2 sections for navigation and affiliates.

-LemoNade-

 

Good for first but for wires, it looks like you were going for coiled, I have a tut on that:

use pen tool and make a design with it, select the brush tool and press the arrow to bring up the pallete, then go to replace brushes and replace current with assorted. Then, select the pen tool and right click on path, then just select stroke path and choose the brush tool in the drop down menue

 

Can we discuss a price?

 

a price? lol you're kidding me surely!

and thanks for comments guys

 

LOL, its not worth money, alright for a first....keep trying.

The wires look good wen done well but not in this case.

 

It's ok, just a little too plain. :/

 

- i kid you not

 

i wouldnt pay more than 10 dollars for it.

 

Looks nice.

 

i wouldnt pay more than 10 dollars for it. [/b][/quote]
Ud pay that much? I kno i wudnt...

 

It' good, but not good enough to BUY

 

Im pretty sure the kid is talking in terms of credits, nobody around here ever spends actual money.

 

Template is alright, okay for a first....not too fond of the colors