3rd Times The Charm :)

Well after a few failed attempts I regrouped did a little research and some hard thinking and this is wat I came up with. It is a Work in Progress but I think this one at least desevers a few peaks unlike the other ones. It is turning out fairly well, I think. Constructive Critisism.

 

It's not bad..I don't like the bubbles.

 

hmm it's decent, but whats with the different colored letters?

 

I don't know just playing around I will change it to solid color.

 

I personally like it, but you can change the bubles to something else, like a mini icon for you site or something catchy, and if you really want to use different color characters, use the first letter in every word, not just random one near the middle

 

Thanks for the comments those bubbles are there for now until I create a logo.

 

Yes, aslong as they're temproray

 

I like the general layout etc, you have managed to put some color in their with the text and logo,

Maybe a slight too much blur on the logo.

The banner really lets this template down and the main bad thing about it, this needs to be redone to fit in with the template, as well as change the font and get rid of that stroke/turn down the opacity.

The banner does not look right where it is or the way it has been fitted into the content box, with it extending the the edges as it gives off sharp corners which you have avoided throughout the rest of the template.

The random on the text should be less random, maybe on the first charachter for example rather than anywhere you feel like, this gives an organised feel, rather than the messiness of its distibution at the moment.

You should try to encorpirate - "caso...where realtity..." into the banner or make it fit in better, seems to be floating around and doesn't fit in its currently location.

Hard to read that font you have choosen (part of logo I think), maybe its just the gap in their thats confusing me.

The navigation buttons doen't seem to fit in, could just be me, try to put a couple more links up their, rather then using text links at the bottom, clients/visitors arn't going to look down their to find information, and it may go overlooked.

Slightly too big (30px) for 800x600 viewers but then people are getting bigger resolutions so not a big issue.

8/10, improve some stuff and that will be an amazing proffesional looking website.

Daz

 

Not bad it all, its quite good, i like the blue color and the blue bubbles are very nice...GJ!

 

Thanks for the tips especially Daz I am going to make a few changes then I will post it again.

 

I fixed a few things but I am wondering If I should make a content box inside of there? Heres the update for now anyways.

 

looks good. if u used outer bevel on the blue bubbles then remove it

 

looks much better, any chance of trying the banner outside the content box (making that slightly smaller), might look better, don't know, daz

 

Like just push the banner to the top instead of leaving that gep?

 

I think it looks cool, although the nav text is a bit pixelated =/