Well can't remember the password on my old account.. Its been a few years to say the least. Trying to get back into things slowly. c4d and photoshop.. ;x
Nice, i like it!,, but few things that bother me: the upside down text doesn't work for some reason and those circular lines are too thick, maybe make them less obvious?
Nice render there. Myself I like the lines, but I agree that they stand out; if you made them thinner/more glowing I do think it would look better. What does bother me is the square; it feels out of place. I'm assuming you made this before the other one? Cause the other one is stronger in composition/finished feel; here I feel like you can play around with it some more and get a stronger outcome. I do like the clean/sharp look here though.
The square behind everything is from the actual render.. It is a reflection I use to get the effect on the render. It's been on quite a few of my renders ..
Once you get the reflection effect though, does the square need to stay there? Just take it out in PS.
i dig the c4d piece, but i cant stand the background. it has no depth. add some contrast and itll look great
