Ok this was made for another forum i just wanna get your views on it i feel i can improve on it, just need to know where im headed with it thank you all for the help
i like my borders -.- but yeah maybe i should stop doing borders. yeah i thought the text was a bit much.
to be honest i agree with all prev comments but would add a few myself, first of which is never use scan lines! to me they always give the appearance of something being over sharpened, also the right hand side has alot of white space left!