This is my try at a vert sig, I tried to go with simplicity in this one. let me know what you think. v2
i prefer v2, next on v1 isnt bad but i think it would look better if you made a clipping mask in the white area at the bottom right and done the text that way. love the original render and well as the space scene, very well dont. is it all done by yourself or is space scene a stock? bluring for depth is fantastic as usual from yourself aswell. still waiting for this tutorial by the way :d
Thats some nice text you have going on in the first edition. try adding a tag line along with the main text.
I like the text version a lot too. Good use of color and negative space with that text, it seems a lot more chiseled Can't say much more, I like it and I think it's good the way it is