Well I d say its a nice start though. You got some depth there and I think that the lighting is pretty okay. The overall color fits as well. Lets look on the details a little bit more. I dont like that grey C4D render you pint at the right and left side at all. I mean, everything is in that purple / yellow color except that c4d. It draws the attention away and that desaturated effect just looks kind of odd, I d remove it. Second is that line on the render in front. That very thin horizontal thing. What does it do there? It has nothing to do with the complete overall style haha. Next I do not get why is right should is enlightened whereas the right one is left with black. You need to remove that shiny line his right shoulder and put it on the left so it goes with the full lighting and leaves us with a clean image. You could also somehow try to get the direction of the background on the right side in a correct position. It should go somehow up like the C4D render and not back and forward again. Hope you get what I mean. Those r the main points. Just add a nice text to it.
Yeah, I was going for some up front effects with those c4d's, but I think I thought about adding them a little too late, and I didn't colorize them like I should have. The line in front is actually part of the stock, I kinda forgot about that while making it, because I thought I'd end up covering it, but didn't lol. As for text... I tried, and as I always have, I failed. So I just left it blank.
There's a good relation between the render and the background, how'd you blend the two? The c4ds are ugly and stick out even through they are white. I'd use stock images or less mechanical looking c4ds, especially for a western themed signature. The smudging is awesome, but those c4ds on the right need to go.
