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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Silent, Oct 25, 2011.

  1. Silent

    Silent New Member

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    I use to make tags four years ago and i just started back up yesterday

    i made these please let me know what you think


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    The first one is sick. I just like it. Missing a nice text though I would rate it 8/10 since I do not know how much of the render did the work for the whole sig, not much to comment there. ;)

    2nd one you kinda messed up. Iono what to say. The background just dont work for me, there is no lighting, there is really nothing interesting going on so that you would look a second time on it. It is nothing special, and again, there is a writing missing. However at that sig, I would add a neat border.

    Third one is pretty nice again. No text though. The depth is very good, the lighting is there. Overall I like how you work with the c4ds there, it really looks just neat. However you blended the render in kind of odd. You soft erased it at the bottom which takes away the effect a little bit. I would cut it hard with pathes around the render you used so it looks better blend in. Maybe some more burning at the edges and some more dodging in the middle for the lighting. ;]

    I dont get why you put the render at the fourth one on half opacity. It looks strange, really. Iono. Does not look like it is finished thats why I wont comment more.

    Fifth one is okay. Something at 6/10. The coloring is good, I mean it fits.
    Depth is definitely there, however I would like to look what is going on at the background.
    On the other side there are some strange lines going through the render, what are those? Where should those come from? Looks just not nice here. I mean, look at the signature. Everything in the background is blurred, looks soft, nice, harmonic and then in the foreground you sharpen the render that hard that you can see the single pixels and strange stripes? That just does not fit.
    On top of that the 3 light sources are freaking me out. Looks like a car which is going to kill that girl there haha. Just get the left one away so you have a nice neat light source where it should be, lightening up the hair of the render ONLY!!! at the right and burn the left side a little bit so it fits. I mean the render on that signature is really like a vertical line in the whole signature where you should put a harder bright/dark contrast.
    I would rate the whole right side a 8/10 if the render was blurred a little bit, the left side however looks odd 6/10 or something.
    The font, for me, takes away too much focus, maybe place it more centrally or just leave it out, iono.
    I really like the background though. ;)

    Hope it was not too harsh.
     

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