Buddy I feel bad for you ahaha, over 60 views and not a single comment... So lets see what youve done here hehe. This looks kinda messed up. Puuuh, dont be bad on me if I go a little bit chaotic in the critic. So, the two ppl in the background blend in okay, you used a soft eraser to blend them in, the color fits to the other style of the signature, that is pretty nice. The guy in the foreground is just put in. You dont know where he should be. Actually he should bein the foreground because his coloring / lighting does not fit at all with the rest, however he is behind that odd little line on the bottom which really looks crappy (sry <.<). The border you made fits the whole style of the sig, the texting does not. It should be some kind of metal look as well. Try to apply it to there, check out some tuts on metallic texting. The animated thing on the bottom right takes away too much focus, you basically only look there and leave the rest of the sig apart. That is not so good as you can imagine... All in all I would say you tried to put in too many different styles. It is some kind of try out what you can do signature. And you know where this leads... Go in the tut section and try out some shit there. They got some epic stuff going on. Lets get to this one. This is far!!!!!! better. Don't get me wrong, it is also far!!!! from epic haha. Dont take it bad please. Lets see, the coloring is okay, but you should either turn the blue more into a green/turqoise or the green/turqoise more into blue. If you really want to use several colors you have to play a little bit more with the colors. My suggestion, just put a gradient on soft light or color over it and lower the opacity a little bit since you like the effect. Photo Filters work nice as well hehe. You can achieve the effect as well by using single color adjustments, for me it is a little too much haha, I would go with the gradients. Phew, the lighting is messed up pretty much. You kind of need 2 light sources. One at the downer right and one in the upper left. You need to read the render a little bit more and look where the bright spots are. Just put a soft big brush at the lower left and adjust it a little. Or for more advanced techniques, just use some c4d effects. The other light source at the left hand of sonic should be some flashy mega-uber power emerge going on haha. I hope you get what I mean. There you really need some c4ds if you ask me. They would work really great. And if it is only a single bubble put on whatever mode blends best over the hand would be okay for the beginning. As far as the depth is concerned I would ask me, where it went. Maybe you want to start out using stocks! Or you go the tutorial way and let others teach you how to create some nice depth. Hard to explain in little words though. Well the writing is kind of messed up as well. You could leave it aside for the moment to concentrate more on the whole signature, post it here on the forums and let the others think about it until you get a feeling for it. Sometimes I take half an hour for just the writing haha, it is really messing my head up. The border should be just a neat black one, no experiments here please Hope I helped ya
