tried something new

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  1. Aug 28, 2011 at 10:44 PM #1
    bdiddie

    bdiddie Well-Known Member

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    tried something new (updated)

    a new style for me so i want some thorough c&c plz. tell me likes dislikes and such. how i can improve and any hints and tips you got

    thanks

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  2. Aug 29, 2011 at 12:08 AM #2
    Master

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    Will do, but I need an answer from you before I can do so; as I can't tell. Besides the chick (who's she?)..


    Of that signature, what is/are the render(s)?
     
  3. Aug 29, 2011 at 12:29 AM #3
    bdiddie

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    the girl is a random one i have in my files and the background is a brick wall stock and there are c4d's others are all random stock files
     
  4. Aug 29, 2011 at 5:27 PM #4
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    Hello bdiddie,
    well i like your composition and the overall look of it,but the first thing i noticed in this piece is that all the elements needs to be blended better all-together(mostly the flowers in front of the focal),also the green leafs on the right side look a bit LQ and oversharpened.

    I would try to reduce the opacity of the flowers between 75% to 87%,darken the edges a tad to bring the attention to the focal point a bit more and maybe try to burn around the focal @ 19% with a 17-21PX soft round brush to help with the depth.

    I like this signature,just needs somes minor tweakings to it IMO,nice work and KAI.

    Regards,H3ll™
     
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  5. Aug 29, 2011 at 11:31 PM #5
    bdiddie

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    how is this version?

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  6. Aug 30, 2011 at 6:51 AM #6
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    I like the second version a little better because the leaves dont stick out as much as the first one.

    Very nice work I like it alot
     
  7. Aug 30, 2011 at 9:51 AM #7
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    Nice sig mate, colour balance goes well with the lady and the flowers. only thing i think you could change is the bottom right corner..(the 3 little spike thingys), to what you do is of your on accord :)
     

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