Well the text in the top one isn't bad. IT has an interesting depth and good focal but the effects are messy and the blur is too much in some areas. Also I'm not really feeling the lines on the left.
C&C I'm not feeling any of it. I don't like the lines. Over blured in some areas. Text would look good on something else. Back ground looks "icky". Color are too washed out. The lines are off. I say chunk the whole thing and start over.
