C&C Well,I'm gonna tell you the truth. The whole things a little to sharp. The focal/render is also over sharpened. The text is a little wavy and in the wrong spot.Try it smaller in greyish and under the gun. Effects/BackGround and the light source are nice.
I like the text, but I hate it's placement. Bit over sharpened. Too much gimps your quality so be careful there. I know you threw some lighting effects on there, but make sure when you do that you don't kill your dynamic range. I wanna see some rich blacks in there, but with your "over everything" lighting you lost those darker tones. make sure you think about where the shadows would be if a light was where you put it.