nice effects and depth. it's a little messy at parts and the text isn't very readable because its in that bright area, but still cool ^^
Depth is good, but I think you gotta put more depth into the depth so it feels more "realistic" and place the text somewhere else, or just take it out. Put some effects on the right side of the sig so it doesn't feel that empty. Honestly, I like it.
The effects to the left of the focal are a little tough to look at, maybe a bit more colouring or something would help that.. the depth is pretty good, and the use of C4D's around the focal is appealing. Don't like the text.
