my verry first sig

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by onlyn00b, Dec 11, 2010.

  1. onlyn00b

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    only n00b noob galery (just startet)

    im made the cut out my self
    [​IMG] 1st ever
    [​IMG] 2nd ever
    what dou u think

    rate them and tell me what i can change or what can inprove my skils
     
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    I'm gonna be harsh.(Learn form this and don't feel hurt over this)

    First off I see u were playin with the blending options.
    Nice cut.
    Um,Little to no blending (the render doesn't blend into it)
    Really low quality.
    No Lighting.
    Text is to large and sticks out 2 much.
    Background is extra low Quality.
    Just look at some tutorials
    I am more to happy too help u.
     
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    that bad quality u mean the bad collors that what i wantet and ur dutch?? thanks for ur help:)
     
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    By low quality I mean it has a hazy look to it.
    Yes I am dutch,But I was born a raised in United states
     
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    added a new 1 :)
     
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    in your second one you really shouldnt glow your renders, let alone to of them.
    the second render needs not be there, make use of negative space.

    for a noobie tip on blending a render to you back ground smudging or bluring will help with making the render look like part of the sig, rather than it looking like its just been placed on top, hell even fuzzy brush erasing the edges works.
    i see you used an C4D as a background, c4ds should really be limited to adding effects not as a background (see any tutorial).
    next try keeping the text together and the same style/font and it shouldnt take the eye from the main render.
    for backgrounds use simple designs or a stock. for overall design get use to using the 'apply image' in PS to blend it all together.

    i have to say tho on a 2nd attempt its better than i could produce.
    hell only just getting the hang of sig design myself.
     
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    ok thanks and gl :)
     
  8. Za¡n

    Za¡n KEEP IT CLEAN

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    great for your first effort at a tag. I'd focus on blending the foreground with background, pretty much make the renders look like they belong there, and the outer glow sorta thing you got going on both of the renders in each tag, it makes it harder to do so. Look into layer masks, and apply them to your renders then brushing to help them blend, and as you go on you'll develop more techniques for blending, but it's a great place to start.

    Goodluck, hope this helps!
     

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