Not bad, I like it. Only things I could really say is the text isn't all that great and it could of been placed a little better.
I like it, although if theres text below "To Rule" (in V2) then i find it very hard to see, I like the design of your signature though.
v.2 looks better imo. v.1 looks too bright. You somewhat fixed this in v.2. The text is also better in v.2 ... more oomph. Good sig.