Text effect looks pretty good at the top, where it's light but not really on the darker parts at the bottom. The lighter subshadow seems too fixed then. Best een raar gedicht wel
Heres a translation for the English speakers: "The Deepest" The deepest The word Aligned With That visual sensation By a man Everyday.
You can't translate a poem like that The meaning of the word drawn equal with the visual feeling Of the everyday man (maybe it can be also "the man on the street")
I didn't mean to offend you at all, I don't speak Dutch and used Google Translate. I guess its the thought that counts