The environment and lights are really nice. I think the subject blends in a little too much. I had to zoom in to realize who it was. While the effects are cool, they aren't flowing in one emphasized direction. I like the overall color scheme and amount of contrast.
As they've already said, focal is too hard to fiind, didn't actually realise there was one at first. You have 2 didnt flow directions, need to all be going one way, there is however some depth which is always good
On the text would be better if you could see the bottom of the Y, not a fan of the white dots next to his ear and neck, but overall much better focal is much easier to distinguish and the effects compliment it nicley, good use of colours and flow. Nice work
