Asparin rose

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  1. warre

    warre Well-Known Member

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    It took me almost 3 hours.
    CNC please

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    looks cool but a few things could'v been done better.

    try not blurring the barrel. since that is the closest to us viewers, it should be sharp(est). now the depth is kinda messed up on that part.
    and you got the lighting from all of the left side, while it should be from the top left corner (his right arm is only lighted from above it seems).
    last thing, but thats personal, i think its too squarish, next time try to add a lil more width, that way u can also get more creative with the background. + more bg = more oppertunity to add depth/flow.
    text looks cool
     
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    Thank you for this very useful comment!
    And for the first time I got a good comment on the text.

    I was not sure about the barrel, as you look to the focal I thought it should be blurred.
    I guess you are right
     
  4. GtG Ghosty

    GtG Ghosty Well-Known Member

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    Took that long?

    Like it!
    Lighting is good.
    Nice effects.
    Not anything bad but the Squareness,And The barrel.
    Nice....
     
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    guess i was wrong on those points then ^^
     
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    Well I'm not sure either of the barrel :)
    I think it would be good in both ways...
    Stop confusing me! :)
     
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    I kinda agree with YaiQuem.
    Just I tried to keep it short.
     
  8. NicholasValentine

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    Yeah sweet text dude. I like the depth of field set where it is with the blurred barrel. I would say just arrange the light so it's in the top left and compliments your render and you're good to go.
     
  9. warre

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    Thank you, sorry for the late response.
    Bought a new computer and had to set all
     

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