Sigs again...

C&C are appreciated

 

hehe i like it
seems u took a liking to H3ll5p4wNs style of gfx

 

like i said in his post inspiring his sigs are way too cool =]

 

i dont really like the border for the second one but they're ok other than that. hmmm the text could also be a bit more whats the word. discrete

 

for the text is it for both of them or just the second one?

 

First sig:
The meanwhile front seems to make it messy, weird placing and not that fitting(the other text is quite good). Try to work on your lightning, its way to visible for softbrushing. The blue kind of messy stuff also doesn't work out that well, try to adjust the color of it. The c4d's might look slightly better if the color was a little bit more like the the render's. Focus is good on this sig, maybe little bit more flow but that isn't something necessary.

Second sig:
The hwang mi hee and lee ji woo fronts are not that well placed. Bg might use a little bit more colour(not just one sort of blue). Focus is way to central in my opinion. Lightning isn't realy good in this sig, nearly no lightsource.

Both sigs seem to heve some kind of drop shadow, this effect doesn't improve the sig in my opinion. I also dont prefere the use of borders on sigs, only well done they give a really good effect. Border should be used in my opinion for large arts where they'll give a good effect.

Just work on your sigs, try to learn new techniques most important is that you like making em.

 

Well,Like the style.But,There over sharpened,You can really tell on the text.By the way,there is too much text.What i mean is its crowded with text.You should only have one text most of the time.Like the "mean while" and "made by loko",are too much just dont "add made by loko" if you really want the "made by loko" make it barely noticeable.

 

Thanks Xavanaugh and GtG Ghosty for your words! ill try and do them less messy and and less crowded... thanks again!