Broken Dream's is alright, I could see some background and boarder work making it look nicer. Second is good but could use some smudging on the right side, but yeahh it's also kinda plain but just try working colors and blending in with render in future works. Here's a halo font for the second tag, http://www.1001fonts.com/font_details.html?font_id=1975
second is wayyyy too plain. even if you just added some sort of gradient or some more like faint low opacity smudging to the background it would look a lot better and much more interesting. first one is pretty good, i just think it could use a little bit of sharpening maybe in the background? otherwise it's pretty good, i like it.
