Like it but the text doesn't fit. It goes from bright to dark way to fast and try blending the render in a bit more.
thanx mate.. well i suck on text and will c what ican do for the blending ...!! can u suggest me something..soon. tomorrow is the last date for the submission
Okay, I'll give you my suggestion. Up to you to decide what to do. Maybe crop the size of it. I'm guessing it's a 450 of width right? if so make it 400, you got negative space that if you don't know what to do with, erase it. Focal is on the right spot. The text however, could be place a bit closer and the font could be a Gothic type of text, which usually looks good with these type of anime characters. Poor amount of effects. Instead of c4d, use some fractals. They look better on anime. Add some, but sparingly. The background, or scenery; could be changed into something more heavenly. Like a sky with some clouds on. Try smudging to make clouds from scratch if you wish or some filters and colors to get that sky look, if you want to that too. Blending, maybe use some effects that could add depth, like the distance between clouds, the place of effects. Like sparkling fractals or bubble c4d. Add gradient maps that follow a color scheme you're working. Mostly what I do is based it on the color that's more repeated on the piece. Also, use photo filters to adjust atmosphere. levels layer and exposure layer, some saturation, color balance, brightness and contrast and even curves can help set out the blending better, lighting and depth. You got a good start. Just needs a few tweaks. Hope I helped, somewhat. Later-
wow mate.. that sounds like i totally have to change the tag.. well don't hve tht time.. will take care of these things in next sotw i just did this to my tag..added a gradient to the text..blurred the image..!! and added some colors on the wing..as it was totally white b4...!! P.S- i did this before u suggested..so couldn't follow ur advice Thanx a ton...i will surely make another one..but not for sotw,unfortunatlyl
