outlin of the focal looks over sharpened.But ok for following a tut.(they never come out good when following a tut)
thats not over sharpened actually..i just did simple 1px stroke..and it came out like that.. and i didn't changed that coz i wanted the outline to be bit brighter than the focal..so that it would also work as a light source..!! Well its just my dusty imagination nothnig else...!! Thanx for criticising was waiting for it from about many hours