I like the lightning, but the background has got to go. I'm unsure of the render; but the text isn't good at all. If the bg was something other than one filter it could be good. It has potential.
sry, but that filter just really kills it...plus, the background is really plain...just check out some tuts and keep experimenting and u should be fine
Add a cloud stock and get rid of the render and put in a kakashi one and bam! wud look a lot better haaha But thats me.. For the BG id get rid of the filter.. and maybe do some smuding around places not sure
