Gandalf

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Dream, Sep 6, 2010.

  1. Dream

    Dream Well-Known Member

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    sorry i have not been posting any new designs recently, i've been getting familiar with the techniques. i'm still a beginner, this is the 2nd sig i have posted on this website. (not second done i have goofed off and made a few bad ones)
    v1 no text:
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    v2 with text:
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    any helpful advice?
     
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  2. Red the Ghost

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    Compo is pretty good but it's way too bright. I know the render is mostly white but still. Text would need some work.
     
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    okay i toned it down a little. how's this?
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  4. Red the Ghost

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    Better. Bring the focal out more by establishing a better light source without making it too bright again. If you have to, darken the far right as well.

    Otherwise, it's nice; the render is blended alright, but there's not much going on. It kind of looks like you just used a marble texture. Not a bad idea, but try doing more with it next time. If you need ideas, the tutorials section will definitely help.
     

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