Good depth for a B&W. - points there. pic looks good sharpened the way it is.. i dont think if it was smooth it would match the rest of the tag good. Once again im gonna say text.. wouldnt look bad but i think you should have gone for a different font. It's very round and it's right near a sharp-faced lightning. Maybe some exta detail around the dark area near her face would have helped bring something more to the background. apart from the detail near her face theres a lot of plain white.
WAY too bright. You need to use pure white sparingly, usually in your lightsources. There's hardly any darkness in this tag to counteract the brightness. The text could be placed better (closer to the face) and it's a tad sharp, but the brightness is killer.
Not really. The colors are good, but they don't go with the render. It looks like a kid coloring in a coloring book with colors that just don't match the picture.
the bw one is like above said too bright as for the color one,it just seems like over contrast.. good effort though
