hmm i'm not feeling any depth in this one. I like the effects but there is a shitload of ugly black negative space on the left and i reacon u could blend it all in together much better. At this point its hard to discern a focal point as such. My attention is just drawn everywhere by the dark purple effects and its most disconcerting... 7/10 great start.
I agree, if you could brighten up the sig and make the focal point more centered, people nowadays are all trying to stick it on the side when doing tags like this, you could make it look like it has a lot more substance to it, good work though, look forward to your next one!