Definitely some improvement here! Let's start with the bad so we end on the good notes. Bad: Coloring is off, colors are a little too close and kinda ugly imo. C4D needs to be blended a little more on the right side... kinda chunky. FHS - Floating Head Syndrome Border. Good: Lighting looks much better than your previous tags. Clean focal point! Yayah! I like the C4Ds you used, although I think that some more practice will help. Flow isn't bad. Still some more work would be nice, but it's decent. ^_^ Overall a big improvement. Keep it up mate.
