Genesis

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by One Of A Kind, Jul 30, 2010.

  1. One Of A Kind

    One Of A Kind Well-Known Member

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    New tag..


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    Trying to get back on track.
     
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    i dont know what to say about that, its not bad but not brilliant either...its average ?

    i give it a 5/10 it just lacks...something
     
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    Hm... I think it looks great. Great Depth and coloring. A couple things though, Flow and light source. You have a buncha lines/effect things that goes all around the place and it disrupts the flow. And for light source I see a bunch. On the right of him, Under his legs, And topleft sorta. :X.. Oh yea and text. I think you coulda used a better font, but it's okay :eek:
     
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    I think the flow is beautiful except in the top left. Those little white things up there throw it off. I think it could use some more depth. Maybe try creating some more lighting around your render? Shadows and whatnot around the C4D would help that immensely. ;)

    It's pretty good though. I like. ^_^
     
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    Thanks for the advice guys.. you've been a massive help. This one is really growing on me so im gonna make a few adjustments and see how it turns out.
     

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