After A Long Break......

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Dragon_Slayer, Jul 22, 2010.

  1. Dragon_Slayer

    Dragon_Slayer Well-Known Member

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    ok soo after a long break I decided to come back to gfx....
    some new stuff I made...I want brutally honest opinions so I can improve fast....thanx...

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  2. Littlest

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    Great job with the text on both. It fits them perfectly. First one is not my style so i won't comment on it.

    On the second however:
    1. The lighting is pretty good, however the tag itself is dark.. again, not truly my style, but good none the less.
    2. The coloring is meh. Mainly because there isn't much of it. However, this could just be your style.
    3. I don't like the little sparkles because they don't tie into anything imo, but again, i'm not super familiar with the style.
    4. The background is plain and simple either a good thing, or a not so good thing. Personally i'd like to see a more chaotic yet focusing background.
    5. Flow: where is it?


    Hope i helped a little and wasn't too brutal. Over all not bad.
     
  3. Dragon_Slayer

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    yea great advice thanx alot....
     

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