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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by One Of A Kind, Jul 7, 2010.

  1. One Of A Kind

    One Of A Kind Well-Known Member

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    First try at a C4D/stock siggy.. you know the type

    I know it needs work... just need some direction where to go from here, what to try.. and what im doing wrong with the C4Ds

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    I think it's really good. Overall there isn't anything terrible with it at all, just minor things.
    It looks a bit oversharpened in some areas, and I think you could have kept the jacket a bit less blended. I'm not crazy about the dark C4D on the right, and I'm unsure about the lighting. Your lightsource just doesn't look... "polished" or "realistic". Looks like some soft round brushing.
     
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    Thanks for your comments.. All taken into account :)

    I had a pop at improving the lighting..
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