First Signature

This is the first signature I made which I am happy with what do you guys think

 

A good start Try and stay away from such an overwhelming use of a pattern (its blocking the background).. also work on text a bit, the colour is off.

 

Yeh I know but thanks

 

agreed to much patern and to bright for my taste

but verry nicely done asp for 1st attempt

 

Good, for a first tag. Like they said, too much pattern, though. It's a bit too monotone, and the render isn't presented too well ... :/