I like it its just that the back of the face at the hair part should be a little more blending in or blended in so the front is being more poped out... But I like the color choice! Probably rate it a 7/10
Oh boy do I have a lot to comment on this one I'll be back later and make a post, I've been up all night and I'm tired but I am going to let you know I have a few things to say
lol well look at a few other posts of mine and you tell me I'll be back to comment in a minute here just gotta post up my signature and I'll start working on it
concept C&C Okay finally I'll take the time to comment sir!! A Little More Indepth Good. You have a lovely way of putting your colors together You show amazingly good potential and have a good idea for effects and layout Bad. Yesterday when I first looked at this signature, I couldn't tell what was going on and until I read the comment below yours I didn't even know there was a face inside the signature. and before I say more... GET RID OF THAT BOARDER! Please do me that favor, boarders are annoying solid colors that distract you from the artwork inside, to be 100% honest I've yet to see 1 signature with a boarder that actually complimented the signature. It also makes it seem like the signature cuts off there. When you don't have one it sometimes allows people to look past it into a bigger picture when you don't have it sealed off. Focal Point. The part of a signature to be most noticed. A focal point is in terms "the center of your tag". The part that you automatically feel drawn too. This will usually consist of your render or text, or both. You already obviously know the concept of blending, but you overly blended your render "the face" into the signature. My eyes are drawn directly to the left side of your signature because it's sharper and better looking. This signature really kills my eyes especially now that I noticed the face, because my eye litterally feels torn as to what to look at. The bottom left or the face. Effects. You have a nice idea behind your effects but they seem more carelessly put into your signature. Atleast only some of them. This might have been the way you wanted to look and thats fine. I'm just letting you know the point of view of another when they see it. Hope I helped
Thanks for the CnC. I've gotten feedback from other sites and other folks have said the same thing on the face - they didn't see it at first. I guess it's harder for me to not notice it since I made it... The face just pops out at me. I'll try not to blend as much in the future.
