2nd try ...

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  1. Ravenwings

    Ravenwings Well-Known Member

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    Two sigs I worked on last night. C&C please. Point out the good things (if any) and things that I have to work on. You know the drill. Thanks!

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  2. Ravenwings

    Ravenwings Well-Known Member

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    BUMP.

    Added another one. C&C's please ... :/
     
  3. cristiano

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    1st is kinda flat and too monotone ... but the 2nd and 3rd are preety cool ... u are getting better :) ... on 3rd light source i think is missing or smth like that ...
    gl in the future
     
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    1st can use more depth
    2nd is to bright for that render loled at first cause it looks like logan is shooting some colored strings from hiss right claw (left from our point of view)
    3rd is vn thought i would loose the bar around the name




    but still nicely done :)
     
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    Yup, I think I need to adjust the tag's color a bit more. XD
    Thanks cristiano! :-)

    Crits noted. Thanks.


    Any others?
     
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    I like #3.. too much c4d in #2 for me.
     
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    First one can use a bit more color, I think, and maybe some fx at the foreground. I am really fond of the sharp lines in the white here.

    Not really feeling the second one. Colors are OK, but the focal and compo are lacking a bit I think. Or it is simply not my taste of effects.

    Third is really nice. Not sure about the text, but the rest is quite awesome.
     
  8. H.I.T

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    I really like the 2nd one. On the first one, Top right is too plain.
     

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