okies here i go the love heart texts looks crap nice work thoe on the render its self but on a whole mate you need to work on the c4d placement and text 6/10 if your lucky Sorry
I like the heart text concept but the glow kills it, renders is too cluttered with effects. Not sure the city background goes well. Maybe a good idea is to start from scratch with the render inside the heart and various effects around it. Good concept though
Thanks, will give it a try and post when complete, any good ideas for a background that would suit it ?