concept C&C Black and whites are never my favorite. Can't really tell whats going on because of your contrast, you have to much black clustered and to much white clustered, if your going to do black and white make the colors compliment each other. Other than that I'd say add color and it'd most likely look better. -concept-
Yeah black and white tags aren't my favorite, and it's not my style. But I hope to see your next one in color. KIU