Yoshimitsu

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by michiganice91, Jun 4, 2010.

  1. michiganice91

    michiganice91 Well-Known Member

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    Comments & Criticisms please. I really hope my text is better on this one, thats something I really need to work on. Thanks guys!

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  2. ReDux

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    Text isn't something that always comes easy to everyone. Experiment, Experiment, Experiment eventually you'll learn a few tricks. I personally feel that the text is blended in to far and is somewhat hard to read. Maybe choose a more contrasted color would help. Overall though I want to see some more color throughout the tag. Decent composition though. :)
     
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    text is ok, needs more blending maybe. this is an ok work.

    i think you killed yoshi's forehead
     
  4. michiganice91

    michiganice91 Well-Known Member

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    ^^ err first guy says text is too blended, second guy says it needs more blending. Im so confused :slow:
     
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    different people have different opinions and preferred ways of working. Take whatever advice you like :)
     
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    pretty much this, you're gonna get mixed comments on most stuff since different people have different tastes (and some don't know what they're talking about). And on top of that, it's text. almost all sig designers at some point have trouble with text, try some different approaches, leave it out and look around for inspiration, it's hard.

    keep working on your sigs, this one could use some work on colors ;)
     
  7. michiganice91

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    yeah thanks man...i dont know how i got stuck in this drowned out colors phase, but Im going to try to get out of it in my next few tags.
     
  8. GLoRy Designs

    GLoRy Designs Well-Known Member

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    honestly though it's really nice, you have potential :) . dinges is right, people have different tastes in style, and yes people ALWAYS have trouble with text when they first start, and still some people do after months or years of doing this. don't sweat it m8, just keep practicing :p . KIU!
     

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