Nice, better than anything i could make.. I like how you do your backgrounds/the dust and speckles, looks good.
It's a bit sharp and the green colours for the background don't really match with the focal. I also think you could have blended the render in a bit more. Maybe some clipping masks or brushing/smudging around his torso at the bottom or the arm on the left side (his right arm).
Thanks i usually do that with my sigs but when i saw the render i thought they would not look good because it's based on Armour and helmet and if i did that kinda clipping mask with brushes like i usually do i knew that it wouldn't suit it. Because it wud hide the Armour alot more and people will wonder what the render is or just see a floating helmet. I usually do that kinda thing with Animi or cartooned formed renders as it seems to flow better with them. Thanks for the opinion tho i'll take it all on board and try to improve on it
I think your text should be closer to the focal,also i have to agree with above,it's a bit too sharpened atm and the green don't really match,but i would suggest to add a few gradients to balance the colours of your tag.Overall it's a nice tag,KIU