Lamborghini signature (first in a good year +)

Don't slate too hard, I've made about 9 sigs in the last 3 years..im not a very active artist anymore..and I'm pretty terrible as I have no flow and suck at text, i always have sucked at text. But looking to get very active and improve to become what I feel would be a good artist..


Anyway here it is...


Positives and constructive critism would be lovely , try not to shoot my confidence too much

 

this is good ^^ thumbs up for your lighting but it lcks flow imo. try not to separate texts it cuz it takes the attention away from your subject.

 

Thanks mate ^_^. Yeah I only seperated the text because It looked a little too empty on one side together so it's the only thing I thought of to fill the space up. I thought another C4D would've ruined things! Thanks

 

Simple and lack of flow but i really like this one

 

Thanks I know I lack flow, but I've never known what it is and how to have flow in a signature? Any threads of anything would be helpful!

 

Try searching tutorials topic, there's lots of tuts where you can learn what is and how can flow be used.

 

Aight yeah I will do, thanks.