i really like the right side of this sig. i think it would look better if you didnt have the dissolved look on the focal, especially his head. it seems like that top left corner should be pure, smooth white and then have it transition into the waves and then into the black. i think if you make the top of his head and his right shoulder (on the left of the sig) smooth, it would be perfect. it looks great already tho, those little things are just the only things i could see that could maybe be improved. great job, i really like this tag
