My first girl anime

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by GLoRy Designs, Apr 18, 2010.

  1. GLoRy Designs

    GLoRy Designs Well-Known Member

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    This is my newest one I just finished! CnC are welcome! :D

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    H3ll5p4wN Well-Known Member

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    Really like your background,but i would try to darken the light source a bit,it's so bright atm that it almost act as a 2nd focal.Also,that big flower behind her back is faded out too much,you can see through it part of her dress.Other than that,very nice tag m8,gj...

    ...I have noticed you have improved again,KIU man;)
     
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    GLoRy Designs Well-Known Member

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    Thanks man! I noticed the flower thing also, but when I was making it, I didn't want them to stick out more than the render, but maybe that would've helped her pop out more. :P
     
  4. Kristibabycakes

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    how do you guys do the flower thing? i wanna know
     
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    You can either use flowers renders,or a stock background.But personnally i prefer the flower render,more easy to works with.If you using a flower stock,you need to delete over the focal and leave the background of your tag intact,then set this layer to screen.Hope this help
     
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    tyvm! :)
     
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    It looks like two images pasted on top of each other. i know there is more to it but if you don't integrate them together somehow they will look out of place like they do now and give the feeling that you didn't work on them hardly at all. if the sig isn't cohesive than you need to figure out how to fix it.
     
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    i really like the background, and the sig in general, its nice. i would say one thing tho besides the flower being too faded. maybe try to blur the top of her hair on the back of her head where its kind of white to make the render blend better with the background? seems like that makes it stick out a little bit and i think it would look real good if that was taken care of. i really like the sig tho, great job
     
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    love it.
    in agreement with light source, tone it down abit.
    with the flowers (all) bring make em solid and just pop the render out a bit, like you said.
     
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    v2 is much better :3
     
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    v2 looks great!
     

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