i think it'd look a lot better using a different stock/render... The colors form the Abstract c4d's and stuff dont ma tch the stock's... so ya
I think if the stock was more integrated with the abstract part it would look amazing. Right now it just looks like you put abstract stuff over a stock. Mix it together a bit. I think the colors and lighting work great.
Lmao! Funny tag, but I actually like it. It's got good flow, lighting, and everything else. Maybe brighten it up just a tad.