Should try and get a better high quality render... Should work on your flow too since i dont see any ...
That actually looks pretty nice. I like the concept. But the c4d's in the background, are kinda distracting. I'd say go even more minimal. Either smudge the c4d's so they're unrecognizable or lower their oppacity, I think it'd help give you a more balanced tag. I don't agree entirely with the above post. I think there's 'flow' (lol, whatever that is, haven't been on gfx forums for some time, can't quite remember all the terminology). For me it's a matter of blended. All the elements in your tag just aren't well blended.
