Long Time Ago...

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by jeroentjee, Feb 6, 2010.

  1. jeroentjee

    jeroentjee Well-Known Member

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    Dunnow if it's like lost my inspiration or just forgot everything as i said in my other thread this is the only sig that came up and where i had the patience to work further with... I hope it's a little good...

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    Too many renders thrown in there. Get rid of some of them and it'd look pretty good. Anyway, good job.
     
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    It feels a little... cluttered. It has potential, but the lighting is far too focused and makes it seem even busier. I'd recommend taking the renders surrounding Jigsaw and spacing them out a little more. Good attempt, keep making it better :D
     
  4. MonkeyDee

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    No no no no, it's a fail.
    Don't rely on your past works anymore.
    If you've forgotten everything/somethings, start fresh. Find that there passion and inspiration again.
    I'm not gonna pretend it's amazing. Effects are pretty decent, but composition is pretty boring.
    Find a more interesting render, don't be afraid to work in colour.
    Don't kill your pieces with too much lighting.
    Always experiment. Peace.

    -Btw, this here is a comment from a fellow 'MIA' gfx'er.
    Consider this one of my first replies in over a year or so.
     
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    So, I isn't trying to be harsh, but drive you forward. :)
     

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