I like some things about it. But it's one of those tags that it's hard to know what to say about it, because I'm not feeling a point to it. But it's confusing with tags like that, because one day you might look at it and feel it a little, and some days not so much.
i like the colored version, try playing around with a few more colors to get a better version, i would suggest trying adding orange a bit of red and who knows u might get a better outcome but nice effects