I actually really like this one, there is however a lot going on - maybe a few more predominantly lighted areas would help but the use of the effect c4ds is really well done, and im enjoying the colour thats in it. Overall, well done, just work a little on the flow / lighting, but it is a great tag
I personally don't love it. It's not.. smooth. You look at it and your eyes have to readjust. Nothing flows imo. the BG needs more depth in a downward-ish direction. Render's rather sharp too. Blur is your friend to an extent, use it. Oh and despite everything pastec4d/set to lighten. Not a good idea unless it works. I think if you did a good grad map. smudged a little. and blurred some so it isn't as choppy it could deff be pretty good.
